I think Chicago is an ok city. I mean I've lived in Chicago for 16yrs now and I would like to expand my surroundings and seek other places. I really don't like Chicago very much. I'm not putting Chicago down or anything I'm just not Chicago's biggest fan right now because there is too much violence. Every time you turn on the news there are always bad reports about how someone was killed. It has gotten so bad that babies are dying quicker than elders and no one seems to find anything wrong with it. What do women or men think about when they kill people in general? If someone can answer that question for me then maybe I will think about changing my mind about Chicago.I hate myself for saying that I hate Chicago, but I'm just keeping it real. I know people are killed every where and violence is all over the world, but it's just ridiculous how so many people are dying or getting killed in Chicago.
To tell the truth I don't want to speak this, but I think our city is the next city to get attacked. I also hate how there are so many homeless people and majority of the people with money just bypasses others who are in need of help. Chicago has been wicked and I pray that God some how changes the city's bad ways, but I thank God for giving me and the citizens in Chicago numerous chances to repent. On the other hand I would like to say that Chicago is a beautiful city and what I do like about Chicago is the numerous events that go on downtown like the Taste of Chicago, the band fest, the jazz fest, and etc. I like that Chicago has so many shopping malls. Now, I must give Chicago props for having the best malls in the world and the best tasting food.
Oh yeah, I love the picture you put up Mrs.Avink because Chicago looks so pretty at night and only at night. I would love it if Chicago looks like that picture all the time. When I look at that picture it amazes me how a city with so many problems looks so beautiful, peaceful, and gorgeous. Just by looking at the picture of Chicago you would never be able to tell all the problems Chicago has.
Despite how much I do not like Chicago because of the violence, and the killing. I must say that some of the people are really nice and I thank them for helping and trying to make a difference. I also thank God for letting his angels walk the surface of the earth. Thank you God for not giving up on us nor Chicago.
Mrs. Avink I was just feeling the need to let out my anger...sorry.I still love you though.
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Hey Katherine It's sad to hear that you don't like Chicago that much and if sad about the violence thats everywhere you go you can't run away from it. It will follow you whether you like it or not.
These are great thoughts Katherine. To tell you the truth, I have definitely considered that Chicago may be attacked some day. It's definitely a reason for me to trust God more.
I want you to revise your blog a little bit. There are two main things I noticed, one of which we have already talked about.
#1. Don't worry too much about this one; I think everyone did it, and I know that it is common email language. Check out how many times you didn't capitalize "I". I know you know this - I is always capitalized. Go back and fix those.
#2. We've been working on this one, and I am going to keep pointing it out. What's wrong with these lines?
"no one seem to find anything wrong with it"
"people with money just bypass others who is in need of help."
"what I do like about it is the numerous events that goes on downtown like the Taste of Chicago, the band fest, the jazz fest, and etc." (this one has 2 of the same type of error)
Hint: Subject/verb agreement
Go back and fix these.
Great job Katherine!
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