Thursday, September 20, 2007
The best movie of all time is...(revised #1)
The best movie of all time is "Enough". Oh my gosh! Mrs.Avink I fell in love with this movie when I first saw it. The first time I saw it is when I went into radio shack and it was playing on the T.V. I was so addicted to the movie that my mom had to literally grab me from in front of the television. I love this movie because it's very suspenseful and has a lot of intresting conflicts in it. What makes it even better is that Jennifer Lopez plays in the movie and she is a really good actress. My favorite part out of the whole movie is when she finally fought back at the end of the movie. At first she would allow her husband to abuse her and do whatever he liked. Then she couldn't take the abuse anymore so she fought back with all the strength she had. I love when women fight back. It's shows that they will not let anyone control them or make them feel like trash. The movie also made me cry because it hurt how a man can hit a women and don't regret it. It's just crazy, but if you haven't seen the movie I recommend you and anyone else to rent the movie. Many women should take heed of the movie and learn something from it.
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Once again, I love your post. I love that you are really excited in your writing Katherine.
Okay - these are all really small things. Correct them and take note of grammar rules you may not have known.
#1. "even more better"
Even though a lot of people say "more better", it is wrong. "even better" is fine. (Note to self: you should never say or write "more better".)
#2. "what ever"
Whatever is one word.
#3. "because it hurts how a man can hit a women and don't regret it"
This is a subject/verb agreement issue. Can you see it?
#4. "if you haven't saw the movie"
I saw the movie. I have seen the movie.
You saw the movie. You haven't seen the movie.
Get it?
GREAT JOB!
Catch Up...
You are all caught up! Great job!
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